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Friday, August 23, 2019

Music story stater

This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video  So Good To Me. I chose this video because I like giraffes I hope you enjoy my story.



One day there was a little girl and she was running down the hallway to go outside to see her pet.
She was feeling happy and excited. It was a sunny day.


She went out the door.The door creaked when the girl opened the door. She was feeling happy.


She walks to the rope and finds nothing on the rope. She is feeling sad. She starts searching for her pet.
She looks in the bushes but doesn't find her pet and she sat on a rock and then she sat on the swing
and had a little swing. She hopped off the swing and she went to the house and made a poster about
her lost pet.


She put the posters on the trees. She went knocking on the doors and asked people
“Have you seen my pet giraffe?”.


She goes to the park and her pet comes up behind her. Her pet finds her and licks her on the hand.
The girl kisses the giraffe on the nose. The girl is happy and excited because her pet found her.

They play hide and seek. The giraffe hides behind the tree.
After they play the giraffe follows the girl home.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Pippa , Its me Lina from shs , I like how you made the way you did the way you made ur story about a lost pet. where did you get the idea of the lost pet from?

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    1. Hey Pippa,its me mary,I like how you made the way you did the way you ur story about a lost pet. where did you get the idea of the lost pet from?


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    2. Morning Lina, it is Pippa here. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      Mr Martyn gave us three videos to choose from and I chose the giraffe one.

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